Welcome to GFXartist, & pretty talented family. Only critic I got is framing could be better, all the stuff left to the bench(dock lines ect) is just distracting and fights to take visual dominance with the subject which in my opinion takes away from the balance of the image. I can't wait to see more work from you, so do keep up with it you seem like you have potential with photography, and DSLR will make it more easier for sharing photos on the net compared to film.

~Jake

I agree with Jake, The frame could be better.
Thank you Jake for saying we are a very talented family my brother is good at drawing, I mean, very good. We all have our own speciality. My father is very good at photomanip. It's the first time I realize we'Re and arty family l;ol..

Très belle photo, pas juste parce que c'Est moi le model , je trouve que tu as beaucoup de talent.
+10

Excellent image – and for once the centred composition really works for me. Placing the sitter in an interesting and involved environment adds character and interest, and the sitter is nicely constrained by the lines of the pier. Including detail and interest behind the sitter would often be a distraction, but it works here for me – it tells a story.
Good work. (and I recognized crazyboy from the thumbnail!)

Edit: I like the frame too!
Oh and almost fotgot to mention, great to see some warm textured grain in there - that's one thing you loose in digital - noise sucks, but grain rocks!

thank you for your comments

Glad to see a picture of Jordan!!.....
Very nice portrait and composition!
I know how hard is to work in a darkroom.
Welcome to GFX!!!
Carlos

I like the composition - I think the dock in the background works well.
Don

Good work!
I like the composition and the colour tone...
Welcome to GFX!

Very nice composition and bg. He sure looks like he's thinking. Hope to see more photos of him!

wonderful photo!
like everything about it +10/10
madd.

very good photo, and that grain in background!
I'm glad to see a traditional photo - there's something special about them, I think that the effects are more 'unreal' and somehow, paradoxically, closer to 'real' than digital ones... it's like black analogs and CD's if you catch the difference I'm trying to write about